The phrase "a message of improved" is not correct as it is incomplete and lacks clarity in written English.
It could be used in contexts where you are referring to a message that conveys improvement, but it needs to be followed by a noun to complete the thought.
Example: "The report included a message of improved performance in the last quarter."
Alternatives: "a message of enhancement" or "a message of progress."
He is making the case to voters that he would be the strongest nominee to challenge President Obama next year on a message of improving the economy and creating jobs.
SEOUL, South Korea — The North Korean leader, Kim Jong-il, sent a message of improving ties with South Korea through his high-level delegation, which met with the South's president, Lee Myung-bak, in Seoul on Sunday in the first major political meeting between the two Koreas in nearly two years, officials said.
The sign in Fig. 6, which was prepared by the students, contains a message of improving the image of the class and reinforcing friendship.
Rizvi decided to run for council this year with a message of improving traffic, "sensible development" and making the city more attractive to business.
But Mayor Michael R. Bloomberg's devotion to the church — Sunday's appearance was his fourth there — and his message of improving education allowed the mayor a pass when he left shortly after his remarks.
A challenging important problem is the identification of influential OSNs users, which can be leveraged by the abovementioned actors for, e.g., advertising a product, propagating a message, or improving the image of a company.
The idea of diversification, which lies at the basis of the construction of the second stage of the proposed denoising architecture, comes from the communications field where spatial or temporal diversification techniques are used to add a fixed amount of redundancy to a message, improving the information transmission.
Cisco will try to use Jabber as a means of improving its messaging offerings in the business world.
Washington is sending the wrong message to Moscow, especially at a time of improving bilateral ties between our two countries and growing cooperation on such pressing issues as Iran's nuclear program.
However, our findings that majority of the participants would not need the cell phone for reminder to take drugs differed from the Weltel reports [ 7, 10] which indicated that most of those interviewed were willing to use cell phones to receive reminder messages for their HIV medication and that use of text message reminders was a feasible method of improving self reported adherence.
