The phrase "a fundamental revision of" is correct and usable in written English.
It can be used when discussing significant changes or alterations to a concept, document, or system.
Example: "The committee proposed a fundamental revision of the existing policy to better address current challenges."
Alternatives: "a major overhaul of" or "a significant update to".
Luther was one of those figures who touched off something much larger than himself; namely, the Reformation — the sundering of the Church and a fundamental revision of its theology.
A new report from the left-leaning Institute for Public Policy Research thinktank has called for a fundamental revision of government policy towards Islamist groups in the Middle East and north Africa.
The theory was indeed of great significance, for it not only united the phenomena of electricity, magnetism, and light in a unified framework but also was a fundamental revision of the then-accepted Newtonian way of thinking about the forces in the physical universe.
This emphasis on evolution and continuity marked a sharp departure from the interpretations of earlier scholars and laid the basis for a fundamental revision of their work.
However, they are often still motivated by the view that there are certain results in science that philosophy simply must come to grips with, and if that involves a fundamental revision of the standard tools of philosophy, then this is an area upon which philosophy must focus, following in the train of science.
In footnote 27 in his opinion for the Court in the District of Columbia v. Heller Second Amendment decision, Justice Scalia suggested a fundamental revision of the Court's assumptions about the role of judicial doctrine, and the concept of rationality, in constitutional law.
Most importantly, it will confirm that America's political class, including Obama himself, remains unwilling to face the political risks posed by any fundamental revision of Washington's 20+-year, deeply self-damaging drive to dominate the region.
The company's own Palm OS software is widely seen within the industry as aging and in need of a fundamental revision.
Through our experience in building a number of behavior-based robots in the past few years, we feel strongly that there must be a fundamental revision in approach to robotics.
Written during the process of the fundamental revision of revision of EU data protection law (the 1995 Data Protection Directive), this volume is highly topical.
On the physical side, he realized (along with many others) that special relativity would require some fundamental revision of the Newtonian theory of gravity.
