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It's a flimsy narrative that glosses over the real question of what that leadership might look like, as well as whether and when intervention is necessary.
This is another exercise in slightly fey Cirque fantasizing, full of conventional circus acts mixed with generic choreography and bent to a flimsy narrative concept, accompanied by the sort of music mimes would make if mimes made music.
Likewise, we oughtn't to expect a David Bowie jukebox musical to follow the usual formula, in which an artist's biggest hits are shoehorned into a flimsy narrative depicting, if we're lucky, a biographical account of their struggle for success, or, if we're less lucky, a crass fantasy.
The site's consensus states: "Though it begins with promise, Hancock suffers from a flimsy narrative and poor execution".
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Typically, though, their scripts were compilations of quotations and anecdotes, many of which might be culled from a Wikipedia entry, bent into flimsy narrative arcs.
Just beyond that (flimsy) narrative frame is a considerable graphical update, which Zynga's Wright Bagwell told me was meant to breathe some life into an otherwise static-looking world.
Pointless musical interludes are peppered throughout, perhaps to bulk out the flimsy narrative (though the film runs a scant 87 minutes, audiences are unlikely to be begging for more).
They power along the flimsy narrative.
One caution: when flimsy narrative superstructure begins to sag, anarchic wackiness can grow wearing.
Thomas accepted these often flimsy narratives as a form of apology; in his limited experience, beautiful women did not generally feel obliged to make excuses.
In Japan the busy animation industry allied visual fireworks to flimsy narratives in the futuristic adventures Sama wozu (2009; Summer Wars; Mamoru Hosoda) and Redline (2009; Takeshi Koike).
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