The phrase "a draft recommendation" is correct and usable in written English.
It can be used when referring to a preliminary suggestion or proposal that is subject to further review or revision.
Example: "The committee has prepared a draft recommendation for the new policy, which will be discussed in the next meeting."
Alternatives: "a preliminary suggestion" or "an initial proposal".
A draft recommendation said: "Go easy on beverages and foods high in added sugars".
Staffers at the U.S. Federal Trade Commission, meanwhile, have circulated a draft recommendation of a possible lawsuit against Google over alleged antitrust violations.
On 26 March, a draft recommendation released by TRAI said the regulator felt there was no need for an exit policy.
Last fall, the task force shocked the men's health community when it issued a draft recommendation against routine use of the P.S.A. test.
On the table in Ottawa is a draft recommendation for mandatory labelling of processed foods containing genetically modified organisms (GMOs), which largely follows the EU approach.
Officials on the merger task force, part of the European competition directorate headed by Commissioner Mario Monti, have already circulated a draft recommendation that calls for rejecting both deals.
To help contain the epidemic, which affects an estimated 1.2 million Americans, the U.S. Preventive Services Task Force today issued a new draft recommendation that urges everyone in the country – adolescents and adults between 15 and 65 – to get an HIV test.
This shift in the direction of pragmatism provides us with, in this particular case, a rejection of the draft recommendation on artificial human procreation.
NISO offered a recent opportunity to comment on the draft recommendation on their 'Altmetrics Standards Project'.
The task force is in the process of developing a set of draft recommendations across a wide range of scholarly outputs, including publications, data, computer code, and educational materials, and will be gathering community feedback on those recommendations throughout the coming academic year.
The following is my commentary, on the draft recommendation.
