The phrase "a draft of revised" is not correct as it is incomplete and lacks clarity.
It can be used when referring to a preliminary version of a document that has been modified or updated, but it needs additional context to be fully understandable.
Example: "I have prepared a draft of revised guidelines for the project that we can discuss in our meeting."
Alternatives: "a draft of the updated" or "a draft of the amended".
A draft of a revised version of [ SysV-ABI] which was never completed.
He ended up quitting in anger during the last meeting in August 2006, after seeing a draft of the revised guidelines that, he said, contained none of his warnings.
Patrick D g, deputy chairman of the Free Democrats in Parliament and the party's spokesman on transportation issues, said he was hopeful that a draft of a revised law could be presented to Parliament within a few months.
The review proposes to keep in place some of the rules that make it difficult to own both a daily newspaper and a radio or TV station in the same market, according to an F.C.C. official who has seen a draft of the revised rules.
A draft of the revised diagram, is available here, via Greater Greater Washington, the transit and planning blog which has detailed all the potential revisions being considered.
The Port of Long Beach moved forward Thursday with its plan to replace the deteriorating Gerald Desmond Bridge, releasing a draft of its revised environmental impact report on the proposed project.
After over two years of anticipation, and an overwhelming civil society effort to convey priorities for strengthening the Safeguards, the Bank published a woefully inadequate, first draft of revised policies on July 30th for a first round of global consultations.
The second series, Addenda, contains an additional 2,000 pages of material including a complete draft of a revised text of La Gran Conquista de Ultramar by George T. Northup.
COSTA MESA — A first draft of a revised city charter was met with a chain of criticism inside the City Council chambers Tuesday night, as hundreds of residents and some organized labor workers called for the city to slow down its latest attempt at an overhaul.
A draft of the framework was revised based on the experts' opinions.
