The phrase "a draft of a revised" is correct and usable in written English.
It can be used when referring to a preliminary version of a document that has been updated or modified.
Example: "I have completed a draft of a revised proposal for the project, incorporating all the feedback we received."
Alternatives: "a version of a revised" or "a copy of a revised".
Human rights advocates raised alarm that its draft of a revised law regulating public demonstrations keeps many military-era curbs on free speech.
The second series, Addenda, contains an additional 2,000 pages of material including a complete draft of a revised text of La Gran Conquista de Ultramar by George T. Northup.
Series II contains another 2,000 sheets of material consisting of a complete draft of a revised text of La gran conquista de ultramar, on which Professor George Tyler Northup had labored until the time of his death on March 29 , 1964
Prof. Northup's typescript draft of a revised, critical text of La gran conquista de Ultramar, Libros III, ff.
COSTA MESA — A first draft of a revised city charter was met with a chain of criticism inside the City Council chambers Tuesday night, as hundreds of residents and some organized labor workers called for the city to slow down its latest attempt at an overhaul.
The review proposes to keep in place some of the rules that make it difficult to own both a daily newspaper and a radio or TV station in the same market, according to an F.C.C. official who has seen a draft of the revised rules.
He ended up quitting in anger during the last meeting in August 2006, after seeing a draft of the revised guidelines that, he said, contained none of his warnings.
A draft of the revised diagram, is available here, via Greater Greater Washington, the transit and planning blog which has detailed all the potential revisions being considered.
The Port of Long Beach moved forward Thursday with its plan to replace the deteriorating Gerald Desmond Bridge, releasing a draft of its revised environmental impact report on the proposed project.
