The phrase "a determination about how" is correct and usable in written English.
It can be used when discussing the process of making a decision or judgment regarding a specific method or approach.
Example: "The committee reached a determination about how to allocate the budget for the upcoming year."
Alternatives: "a decision regarding how" or "a conclusion about how".
"Congress will have to make a determination about how they want to deal with that," Barnes said.
"Without more information like slaughter dates and shelf life, it's hard to make a determination about how or where the higher counts came from".
"The goal is to make sure that the Libyan people can make a determination about how they want to proceed, and that they'll be finally free of 40 years of tyranny and they can start creating the institutions required for self-determination".
"I grew up with lesbians and gay men in very important roles in my life, so I must have had to make a determination about how I feel about that, and I also had to recognize that people were different colors and of different national origins.
The students said they hoped that the state's politicians would listen to their opinions and experiences and then make a determination about how to diversify the school: by expanding gifted and talented classes, which many of them had benefited from, to low-income neighborhoods and by tackling the entrenched segregation they had endured throughout their younger years.
A court spokeswoman said the office would make a determination about how to proceed "if the case is filed".
The Sentinel wants one of the nation's leading authorities on head trauma to review the pictures and make an independent determination about how Earnhardt died.
Let them make their own determination about how their decisions might influence you to quit your job or stick around.
Though it was formed prematurely one mother-daughter team in Italy now shares clear-eyed determination about how to re-sculpt the appreciation of their region's wines.
I think we have the opposite situation in this particular case, where the public health authorities may have information that may be of use and assistance to the animal health community in making some determination about how the disease progressed or the epidemiology of the disease.
We believe in providing these groups with a great degree of self-determination about how they want to pull themselves out of poverty.
