The phrase "a detailed version of" is correct and usable in written English.
You can use it when referring to a more comprehensive or thorough account of something, such as a report, explanation, or narrative.
Example: "The author provided a detailed version of the events leading up to the incident in the final chapter of the book."
Alternatives: "an in-depth account of" or "a comprehensive description of".
Under commission rules, the staff will release a detailed version of the proposal in coming days.
Gayle offers a detailed version of meeting Charlotte Edwardes, whose recent interview with him in the Times added to his notoriety.
Dominating the film, Hoffman plays a theatre director who uses a MacArthur grant to mount a detailed version of his own life, staged on a set of New York built to scale inside a colossal warehouse.
Other high-placed officials, including the president, publicly disclose portions of their schedules, the suit said, and Gov. Andrew M. Cuomo last month began posting a detailed version of his daily schedules online.
Although prosecutors have not offered a detailed version of the events leading to Mr. Christofi's death, they have said that at some point during the party, Mr. Williams fired a blast from a 12-gauge double-barreled shotgun, which struck the limousine driver in the chest.
Though the police have not given a detailed version of events, Long Beach homeowners with knowledge of the incident said a fight started when youths — during a beach party at which there were hundreds of teenagers and lots of drinking — were harassing Mr. Malecek's 16-year-old sister about her red, white and blue bandanna.
The resulting 71-taxa tree shows a monophyletic Diplura, with 78% support (see fig. 3 a and a more detailed version of the tree in supplementary fig. S3 A in supplementary file S2, Supplementary Material online).
LIPA has hired a consulting firm, Stone & Webster, to coordinate the plan, which a utility spokesman said would be a more detailed version of a plan that already exists.
Mr. Green announced a more detailed version of a housing construction plan, saying the city should spend $5.6 billion, financed in part by revenues from selling city-owned property, to build 150,000 units of low- and middle-class housing.
The Arab foreign ministers gathered here were expected to spend Saturday shaping a more detailed version of a peace proposal put forth by Crown Prince Abdullah of Saudi Arabia, suggesting that Arab states would give Israel full recognition if it withdrew from all territory occupied since the 1967 Arab-Israeli war.
Though there are many perspectives on the types of iterations that can be performed, the chapter focuses on two: Will this iteration be a more detailed version of a more conceptual predecessor, and will this iteration be an improvement or change of a prior version based on stakeholder feedback or new and ostensibly improved ideas?
