The phrase "a convincing statement of" is correct and usable in written English.
It can be used when discussing the effectiveness or persuasiveness of a particular assertion or claim.
Example: "The author provided a convincing statement of the benefits of renewable energy in her article."
Alternatives: "a persuasive assertion of" or "a compelling argument for".
I haven't seen a convincing statement of Laiki's recent equity funding level.
But the old Broadway, the Broadway of the big, lush, traditional rock-'em-sock-'em musical, made a convincing statement of its own.
The band's name and some of its song titles give the impression of an uncouth unit, but tracks like "Bad Omen" warn against devil worship, and "Peace Sells" is both a convincing statement of personal and social responsibility and a sharp anti-war message.
Thus, it would be a good idea to write a convincing statement that can make the organization excited about having you onboard.
Prof Douglas Futuyma at Stony Brook University in the US, who was not part of the research team, said: "They have made a dramatic and convincing statement of how much evolutionary diversity has already been lost.
While the Belgians traded sonic groundstrokes from the baseline, Federer made his most convincing statement of the tournament.
"This is not", says the preface, "an academic text". This is a more convincing statement than anything in the ensuing 300 pages of piffle that, bafflingly, Allen Lane has decided to publish.
My academic CV is easy to tailor to each job I apply for and, through years of experience, I can write a convincing personal statement pretty quickly.
Apple has since issued an official (albeit, not terribly convincing) statement explaining the antenna issue away.
Just as important is a convincing personal statement, outlining your reasons for wishing to undertake the course, details of relevant professional or personal experiences and future career objectives.
