The phrase "a convincing message" is correct and usable in written English.
You can use it when referring to a communication that effectively persuades or influences the audience.
Example: "The speaker delivered a convincing message that resonated with the audience and encouraged them to take action."
Alternatives: "a persuasive message" or "an impactful message".
That straight talk resonated with voters in a highly pragmatic city, and it could indeed be a convincing message in the 2010 mid-term elections.
With politics unable to satisfy basic needs and aspirations, and in the absence of a convincing message of hope, anger is directed at anyone but the powerful: immigrants, unemployed people, public-sector workers.
John Richardson wrote from Brussels: This was the speech of a politician who knows his history, does not want to repeat its mistakes, and has the strength and the clarity of mind to formulate a convincing message of hope for the future based on mutual trust between the European nations, which the crisis has so far called into question.
At the moment, MTV Networks may need a business star, or at least a leader who can formulate a convincing message that the company remains powerful, profitable and well positioned to take advantage of an exploding media environment where exploiting the Internet is the potent new business play.
A resumption of its former dividend policy would send a convincing message to The Street.
When it comes to sending a convincing message to Russia there have been months of indecision, weakness and self-interest.
President Bush is planning several major speeches next week to counteract what some administration officials say has been a muddled effort to project a coherent, convincing message to Americans about the war in Afghanistan and their safety at home.
B1 A NEW STRATEGY -- President Bush is planning several major speeches next week to counteract what some aides say has been a muddled effort by the administration to project a coherent, convincing message to Americans about the war in Afghanistan and their safety at home.
America's ambassador to India, Richard Verma, notes that all this has "chilling effects" on democracy.Mr Modi has made some steady, if not yet spectacular, progress in office so far, but he needs a clearer vision for economic reform, a broader range of talent within his government and a more convincing message of moderation.
He is finding a more convincing message on the economy and on his differences with Mr Obama.
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