More to the point, writing it might help answer some questions about the story that he could not shake.
The reality is that, after the reporters and news crews moved on, Stockton has pulled off a remarkable turnaround, reducing its crime rate and asserting a new financial discipline – to the point, writes the regional newspaper, The Record, that it has become "the poster child" for other U.S. cities trying to turn around their fortunes.
Excessive, descriptive and flowery writing needs to be condensed into strong, to- the-point writing.
Write with economy: Launched project (not "I launched project") - Take out any extra info (irrelevant experience, projects and so on) and leave off job duties to concentrate on achievements and impact - Don't include references or hobbies Get to the point: Write concisely.
Once the manufacturers started modifying their products, Mr. Sokolof continued to make the point, writing a book, "Add Years to Your Life" (2002).
And the writing – friendly, to-the-point and like reading an email recipe from a friend.
To state that food production and consumption are increasingly in the public eye is to understate the point," writes Andrew Chignell, associate professor of philosophy, and his two co-editors in the introduction of "Philosophy Comes to Dinner: Arguments about the Ethics of Eating" (2016, Routledge).
She has also written for children with Life's Little Fable (hopefully less clinical than her adult work), and is perhaps mellowing, to the point of writing a Christmas book, Scarpetta's Winter Table, with an emphasis on recipes rather than autopsies.
He likes to quantify, to the point that writing parts of this book while on a treadmill (and counting his mileage) is among his proudest achievements.
Newly released church documents revealed that the cardinal had played a greater part than he had previously acknowledged in handling abusive priests, to the point of writing them sympathetic letters.
A mendacious, ridiculous, deluded buffoon of a writer intoxicated by fame to the point of writing drivel.
