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3) Regarding the paragraph 'Producing a systems level view of receptor activity for the Drosophila antenna', either this very intriguing analysis should go in the Discussion or a deeper analysis is required for the reader.
Major issues of the manuscript to be addressed include: 1) There are a few issues regarding the paragraph: "Hourly air temperature data collected near Lövvik from 1st August until snow cover in 2008, 2009 and 2013 revealed mean average autumn temperatures close to the 8°C; the optimal Lov-1 constant vernalization temperature.
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Regarding the first paragraph of the reviewer's comment, we understood that the critique was that some control was lacking.
Science 312, 372 373) Regarding the final paragraph before the discussion, where Penny states that 'Perhaps this section is unnecessary,' I do agree that it is not needed to appreciate 'cooperation at the macromolecular level', but I think it is helpful to have made the comments on broader interactions.
We have removed the paragraph regarding the frequency of complex events, as requested.
He wrote the manuscript except for the paragraphs regarding the work performed by MH and SD, or by MH.
We have therefore removed the paragraph and experiments regarding the XI-based pathway from our manuscript (paragraph beginning with "It has been proposed", along with Figure 6, Figure 6 figure supplement 1, Figure 6 figure supplement 2, Table 1 and the associated Methods sections).
Corrected on August 30: to clarify the fourth paragraph regarding the remaining board member's role.
Finally, we come to the statement made at the end of the previous paragraph, regarding the convenience of using ((n,q -forms instead of ((0,q -forms.
Or to put it in simple terms, Liuhe could have integrated a short paragraph regarding the CSR just like what Beidahuang had done.
Esquire published an article which opened with a scathing paragraph regarding the shortcomings of Boomers.
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