Sentence examples for Please revise this from inspiring English sources

I wrote the doctor a letter — please revise this bill, as it is clearly erroneous — and included my "M.D". Instead, the doctor left me a message saying he was waiving the bill entirely as a professional courtesy.

" In case of fourth state reverse scale was used, and average of patients' scale to these five questions was used " please revise this statement.

".. and death act as conditioning" consider "acts" " Despite statistically insignificance in this study, no relationship between laboratory tests and adherence to doctors' recommendation raises important implications for future research" Please revise this statement ".. instead possibly decreases lower the patient's trust in doctors" please revise the statement I have read this submission.

Please revise the description of this result.

Required textual revisions: 1) Please revise the text to make it as clear as possible how much residual AP2 function may exist in the hemi knockouts.

Essential revisions: 1) Please revise the manuscript to provide more focus on the major conclusions and message and a clearer, more streamlined description of the experiments and data.

(6) Please revise the abstract for clarity "This component is highly flexible and customizable, allowing the presentation of annotations by rows, all centered, or distributed in non-overlapping tracks.

Please revise the paper (major revision) according to the detailed comments below - then the power and impact of the paper will be much higher.

Please revise the figure.

Please revise the relevant sentences to clarify the argument.

3) Please revise the text to include p-values for all data upon which arguments or conclusions are based.