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Lacking narrative, lacking drama, lacking characters, "Voyage of Time" can be easily assimilated to the realm of experimental film.
Ultimately, while Roeg made full use of the desolate beauty of both his leading man and the New Mexico location, the disjointed editing meant The Man Who Fell to Earth could be criticised for lacking narrative drive.
Reviews don't place this in the same league as the Sherlock books, but as The Telegraph explained, "this is a work in progress; a compendium of ideas, lacking narrative drive".
Justin Haywald of 1UP.com was critical of the lacking narrative, feeling that the game failed to explain the purpose of the constructed traps or rationale for how the game's world worked, and that the final act left him "more confused than when [he] began".
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Lacking memory, lacking direct experiential knowledge, amnesiacs have to make hypotheses and inferences, and they usually make plausible ones.
Narrative intensity?
And narrative?
Narrative problem?
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Lacking eyebrows gives them a surprised look, like that of innocent babies.
Lacking strength in depth, the women's game needs a great rivalry.
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