Sentence examples for Edited draft from inspiring English sources

But the references in the draft to higher rates of searches and use of force for blacks and Hispanics were crossed out by hand, with a notation in the margin that read, "Do we need this?" A note affixed to the edited draft, which the officials said was written by Ms. Henke, read "Make the changes," and it was signed "Tracy".

Includes edited draft of "Vance Avenue Choice Neighborhood Documentation Activity" for the "Vance Avenue Choice Neighborhood Planning Grant" Includes meeting agendas and notes, program schedules and reports, logos and other materials such as proposed schope of service, planning grant documents, PowerPoint report of activity, etc.

Contains an edited draft of Cronache dall'isola dei diavoli rossi, Stryker's unpublished Italian manuscript account and analysis of Cuban politics and society based on her time there; it became the basis for When the revolution was young, published in 2004.

NK reviewed and edited draft instruments, supervised data collection process, reviewed and edited draft manuscripts.

RV and SAR reviewed and edited draft manuscripts.

MKS served as faculty for the on-line case-based intervention and reviewed and edited draft manuscripts.

NT: Reviewed and edited drafts.

JS also edited drafts of the manuscript.

DE commented on and edited drafts of the manuscript.

AG: Conceptualized the review, reviewed, and edited drafts.

Both authors drafted the manuscript, reviewed and edited drafts of the manuscript.